The really not-thoughtful Laurie is still to come...bwah hah hah. This bit was actually written a couple of weeks ago and had expanded from an envisioned 1 - 2 pages to way more than that to encompass plotty things I didn't want to stop action for later. And I was totally going to sweeten the talky plotty with porn, but porn is slowly getting rewritten, and urg. By which I mean, this is hiding here until I finish porn :)
But thanks for the kind words - it perks me up that you like this half!
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Date: 2009-09-14 05:40 pm (UTC)But thanks for the kind words - it perks me up that you like this half!