COMBINATION BITE-HEADBUTT. No, you are a bizarrely brilliant genius, Mr. Kovacs. I love everything in this fic, including unsubtly chummy!Adrian and the clubbing stereotypes, but above all a winner is the immensely plausible ridiculousness of the things Walter does. Writing 'poetry' (heehee GINSBERG oh DAN ♥ you utter romantic) in the club? Check. Meeting new people was really more Rorschach’s thing? Check. Taking advantage of Daniel’s kind nature was Rorschach’s privilege, and no one else’s? Check. Yep, this is totally the same guy who jumps out of people's fridges. I just about died laughing.
On a more SRS note - you handle Walter's Issues pretty damn well. It is hard not to woobify him after this. :runs to part two:
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Date: 2009-04-25 08:29 am (UTC)On a more SRS note - you handle Walter's Issues pretty damn well. It is hard not to woobify him after this. :runs to part two: