I'm glad you enjoyed! Eddie quickly became my favorite POV - any bad joke you think of, he'd totally own :)
Funny enough, fighting and fucking can be the hardest things to write - you can certainly picture it well enough, but applying words without using the same ones over and over... Thanks for the kind words, I'm glad it came across somewhat sensibly :)
P.S Awww, Dan!
I'm working on it...he'll get his. In some form or other.
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Date: 2009-04-16 09:28 pm (UTC)Funny enough, fighting and fucking can be the hardest things to write - you can certainly picture it well enough, but applying words without using the same ones over and over... Thanks for the kind words, I'm glad it came across somewhat sensibly :)
P.S Awww, Dan!
I'm working on it...he'll get his. In some form or other.