This is an interesting story. I like the immersive setting and the development of the characters. The pacing feels very natural, and i find it engaging even though I read very little scifi.
On the other hand, Im disappointed that this story like most others will simply descend into porn.
It's too bad, but it's impossible to please everyone.
However, Im thankful for what is already here and do enjoy the story as it is. Thanks for sharing.
I felt compelled to draw this.
"get your claws out of my partner, he's a good man"
http://i35.tinypic.com/2v29l51.jpg
It's sort of how I envision the character, with his large multiport neckjack and scarred from surgery.
I know he doesn't have the blots, but I put them in anyway because it more character specific. I do have blotless versions if you're interested.
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Date: 2009-10-18 05:58 am (UTC)On the other hand, Im disappointed that this story like most others will simply descend into porn.
It's too bad, but it's impossible to please everyone.
However, Im thankful for what is already here and do enjoy the story as it is. Thanks for sharing.
I felt compelled to draw this.
"get your claws out of my partner, he's a good man"
http://i35.tinypic.com/2v29l51.jpg
It's sort of how I envision the character, with his large multiport neckjack and scarred from surgery.
I know he doesn't have the blots, but I put them in anyway because it more character specific. I do have blotless versions if you're interested.