this is the best chapter yet. I don't know what the hell you mean dull. I see what you meant about Laurie, the world's oldest spoiled teenager, and you did a fantastic job of having her be not nice and thoughtless and even hurtful and at the same time awesome. I love watching her sync up with Rorschach in any incarnation. And Dan, so insecure and so perverse. DANNNNNN.
he suddenly realised it would have spiralled out from comparing modifications, shirts discarded to contrast spliced spines,
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this is the best chapter yet. I don't know what the hell you mean dull. I see what you meant about Laurie, the world's oldest spoiled teenager, and you did a fantastic job of having her be not nice and thoughtless and even hurtful and at the same time awesome. I love watching her sync up with Rorschach in any incarnation. And Dan, so insecure and so perverse. DANNNNNN.
he suddenly realised it would have spiralled out from comparing modifications, shirts discarded to contrast spliced spines,
I LOL'd.
Can't wait for the next bit.