I'm glad you enjoyed! Eddie quickly became my favorite POV - any bad joke you think of, he'd totally own :)

Funny enough, fighting and fucking can be the hardest things to write - you can certainly picture it well enough, but applying words without using the same ones over and over... Thanks for the kind words, I'm glad it came across somewhat sensibly :)

P.S Awww, Dan!

I'm working on it...he'll get his. In some form or other.