Ah I read this fic a couple of weeks ago and didn't leave a comment because I'm an idiot. And then I kept thinking back to it and couldn't remember where I'd seen it, which was a tragedy!
So happy to have found this again. Apart from the brilliant Eddie voice and the way you make the pairing plausible without it just being a straight up PWP, (I mean, the way Eddie manipulates Rorschach is great) I am really impressed with the fighting!
I think lots of people find it hard to write action like that without it being stilted, but the way you describe the 'training' scene is just good, flows.
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Date: 2009-04-13 01:50 pm (UTC)So happy to have found this again. Apart from the brilliant Eddie voice and the way you make the pairing plausible without it just being a straight up PWP, (I mean, the way Eddie manipulates Rorschach is great) I am really impressed with the fighting!
I think lots of people find it hard to write action like that without it being stilted, but the way you describe the 'training' scene is just good, flows.
P.S Awww, Dan!