LOVED IT Perfect Comedian voice, and surprisingly Magnificent BastardishXD, so manipulative of emotions. Man, on top of that physique and that amorality, he has yet another advantage?XD I liked how the idea formed in his mind, how it sounds more like justification than anything else...I can't decide if he's really trying to do them a favour Comedian-bastardness-style, jealous of the two, just fucking with them for the hell of it, truly interested in Rorschach (in any way you interpret that)...I think there were subtle touches of all of them. I also like his fascination with Rorschach, because I've always thought he'd find him compelling, and Rorschach's idolation of him, identifying him with Charlie.
I also loved your pre-Roche Rorschach -people tend to forget he used to be an almost normal person back then-, and Dan's tense wanting-something-more-but-don't-know-what relationship with his partner, and his adorable possessiveness. Poor Dan. The Comedian's a bastard.
I hope you make a sequel and have the Comedian stalk Rorschach because he's intrigued and possibly a bit obssesed with him now. Oh, and Dan getting pissed off at knowing something happened but not knowing what
Almost forgot to comment on my personal favourite aspect to this fic!!! The power balance. The Comedian has all the emotional power, but Rorschach couldgive him a run for his money for unpredictablinessXD. Also, the Comedian is obviously stronger, but I believe Rorschach would be the more dangerous fighter of the two, taking into consideration his personality, background and fighting style. I love that it shows. Blake tends to get overpowered in fic (unless it's against AdrianXD), so it's nice of him to acknowledge the danger Rorschach presents (hey, he lasted more against Adrian; a total of seconds more, but that's somethingXD) and feeling threatened and a bit scared of him. Rorschach's a badass; glad you didn't forget ^^ (and the fights, they were AWESOMELY written. I could picture every single move, which is something I usually don't bother doing when reading fics. I could totally see the brilliant tactician that Rorschach is, coupled with his powers of learning quickly, giving the Comedian some real trouble)
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Perfect Comedian voice, and surprisingly Magnificent BastardishXD, so manipulative of emotions. Man, on top of that physique and that amorality, he has yet another advantage?XD
I liked how the idea formed in his mind, how it sounds more like justification than anything else...I can't decide if he's really trying to do them a favour Comedian-bastardness-style, jealous of the two, just fucking with them for the hell of it, truly interested in Rorschach (in any way you interpret that)...I think there were subtle touches of all of them. I also like his fascination with Rorschach, because I've always thought he'd find him compelling, and Rorschach's idolation of him, identifying him with Charlie.
I also loved your pre-Roche Rorschach -people tend to forget he used to be an almost normal person back then-, and Dan's tense wanting-something-more-but-don't-know-what relationship with his partner, and his adorable possessiveness. Poor Dan. The Comedian's a bastard.
I hope you make a sequel and have the Comedian stalk Rorschach because he's intrigued and possibly a bit obssesed with him now. Oh, and Dan getting pissed off at knowing something happened but not knowing what
Almost forgot to comment on my personal favourite aspect to this fic!!! The power balance. The Comedian has all the emotional power, but Rorschach couldgive him a run for his money for unpredictablinessXD. Also, the Comedian is obviously stronger, but I believe Rorschach would be the more dangerous fighter of the two, taking into consideration his personality, background and fighting style. I love that it shows. Blake tends to get overpowered in fic (unless it's against AdrianXD), so it's nice of him to acknowledge the danger Rorschach presents (hey, he lasted more against Adrian; a total of seconds more, but that's somethingXD) and feeling threatened and a bit scared of him. Rorschach's a badass; glad you didn't forget ^^ (and the fights, they were AWESOMELY written. I could picture every single move, which is something I usually don't bother doing when reading fics. I could totally see the brilliant tactician that Rorschach is, coupled with his powers of learning quickly, giving the Comedian some real trouble)