ASDJKLFHDLFHDLH THIS WAS AWESOME And scary since this morning, I was actually picturing a Comedian/Rorschach scenario in which he lures/baits Rorschach into having sex with him because Ror and Dan would never do it XD
The Comedian's voice is captured perfectly. I really like how you made him so manipulative beneath a tough/"innocent" exterior. Plus, I also thought that the catalyst for Comedian/Rorschach is Rorschach's idolization of the Comedian (patriot, veteran, father-figure and what-not)and the Comedian's fascination with Rorschach (in this case, his sexuality and such). So yeah, for me, you hit their relationship spot-on, and I really hope you'll write a sequel! This pairing needs more love!!
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And scary since this morning, I was actually picturing a Comedian/Rorschach scenario in which he lures/baits Rorschach into having sex with him because Ror and Dan would never do it XD
The Comedian's voice is captured perfectly. I really like how you made him so manipulative beneath a tough/"innocent" exterior. Plus, I also thought that the catalyst for Comedian/Rorschach is Rorschach's idolization of the Comedian (patriot, veteran, father-figure and what-not)and the Comedian's fascination with Rorschach (in this case, his sexuality and such). So yeah, for me, you hit their relationship spot-on, and I really hope you'll write a sequel! This pairing needs more love!!